All Comments on 'Wild Card Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Oh man

I"ve been crying these whole three chapters. The triggering! Poor sweet Cory. Poor besotted Efrain. The Christmas presents. The brothers not knowing. Just the fact that bouncy, loving, secure Cory was all crushed by his own parents when he was so confident. I've been hoping a brother would turn up with a cat but this was so, sooo, SOOO much better. I can't wait to see how Lola gets on with the South Pole!

Justfeedack09Justfeedack09over 7 years ago

Chapter 2 seemed so short and I was bummed about waiting for more but bam-chapter 3! This continues to be the best story I'm reading online.

Dragonfly424Dragonfly424over 7 years ago
Besotted!!!

First, I'm obsessed with the word besotted. So great. Next love love love that the boys can be friends with these two. I hope that's what their reappearance means. And finally, Cory got a kitty. Perfect! I'm so glad that Cory has come out of his funk a bit. I bet he won't let himself get dragged down too far for Lola's sake. He's too good of a daddy.

I'm totes besotted over these boys and impatiently await the return of Preston and Indie because crushing is so compelling. Sigh. You've done it again.

whenwilliwhenwilliover 7 years ago
So unfair so unfair so unfair

I have binged on your stories and now I must join the rest and wait. You are an awesome writer!!! The humor, characters, story line, all flows wonderfully together. Thank you for sharing and waiting for more.

MbeseMbeseover 7 years ago
So sad!!

Poor Cory!! I hope his brothers show up and make it better!! I don't know why I feel they should, but I hope they do.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Happy

So happy for Cory, and so happy for Efrain. Efrain finally realizing his attraction is more than just that. And....Cory got a kitty! Cory is waking up , too. Can't wait for the next one. I'm hooked on your work. Keep it coming, please. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I just love these guys!

I just read all of book one and am now on book two (in two days! ... I had some down time I suppose) I had to write and say I love this! All of it! Your writing (can't believe you had never done this style before because you own this!) , your characters! ( don't listen to the haters! There is Definitely not too many characters! they feel like real people because there are so many characters, real people have lives with lots of people in them! and because of your writing these men have come alive for us! I love that it's not all just smut (don't get me wrong smuts great but man can't survive on sex alone) anyways the point is.... I feel like a fly on the wall watching the antics. I love that it's not all sunshine and roses. I love that you let one family be excepting and another family not be! That's real life, and sometimes your friends become your family. I hope Corys family comes around or his brothers react better but, if not I'm glad he has Rain and the rest of his chosen family! I'm glad Preston and Indie are able to help each other heal !! I can't wait till they realize how much they are loved in return... Thank you for writing this and please keep it coming I have a couple friends reading it now who agree! Thanks again, C

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Waiting

We (your readers and lovers of your work) are waiting with baited breath for the next chapter. You've done such a good job with this creation! We need more. Can't help but to fall in love with all of the main characters in this story. Can Cory's brothers come running to his defense? Not happy with Mom and Dad. Waiting! Please!?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
In love

I love your writings so much!!! I am so excited how you are telling this story and where will you take the boys. Can't wait more! (And still waiting the Three Words ;-) I am dying here...)

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Oh Wow! I love them all.🥰

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