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Night In Tunisia

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by Anonymous

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by pink_tulip05/09/04

Very lovely

I thought your work was very romantic. Nicely done

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by YDD05/09/04

Night in Tunisia

Some of this is very interesting,
with some sharp, intriguing images.
But I find your middle stanza a bit confusing.
Why "satyred" and why a verb tense change?

Write us another like this one.

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by Merrymaker05/10/04

Enjoyed this

I like how you wrapped this up in the last two lines...nicely done.
~Merry

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