All Comments on 'Chubby Hijabi and Stranger'

Love the build up to this certainly a lot of fun!

Amazing story

Read the title! But this is easily the top ten for me! Especially the pig part and how it's haram, fyi...the Quran doesn't say those things, but can send you some quotes that you may like

Please do a second part. I loved the build up in this story.

Write more please

Write another chapter

Just insulting the religion you fucking bitch

" "yaaaaaa allllaaaaaahhhhhh I loooooovvveeeeee yooooouuuurrrrrr biiiiggggggg whhiiiittttteeeeee cooocccccckkkkkk."

Try saying that out loud and see how ridiculous it sounds.

I think you should check out an erotic Thesaurus:

Cock - 57 repetitiions

Pussy - 21

Slut - 15

Big - 27

Cunt - 25

Cum - a mere 12

And an untouched virgin clamoring for anal sex first time out. Very believable - not.

Boring and tedious.

Please keep it up. Big fan of your writing.

I liked the idea, but it felt really unrealistic at times, and it could have been better written and had more built up.

You dont need to do the hollywood porn writing thing of big white cock, anal sex first time. I feel you needed to step up onto bigger and bigger events to keep interest, it would have been useful if you were able to build sexual tension without it.

Also as a muslim a lot of the anecdotes were just off putting because theyre not realistic. There would be a lot of hesitation, doubt and inner conflict. The pace would be far slower. There would be times when she has a guilty conscious and not follow throgh and backtrack. It probably woldnt resort to full sex like that.

But who am i to criticise, its your fantasy and its real for you. As a muslim some of the stuff was implausible which turned me off and i began debating the ideas in my head mid wank. Wasnt ideal.

More inner conflict, more sexual tension, more hesitation and morr sexual tension

This writer is a complete and utter scumbag

I read all your stories 10 times and this gets me off every single time as a Muslim Arab Chubby Girl who isn’t married I can relate to how horny she is and fuck this story gets me wet instantly, wish there was something like this in reality but we unfortunately we muslim girls will end up I arranged marriages and vanilla sex without anyone know how freaky or wet we can get by stories like these. Thank you for the content my wet pussy and organism thank you as well

I love hooking up with Muslim chicks off minder. Just tell them you want to learn about Allah and the sluts let you fuck them.

soooo hot!!! I loved it...want to get in touch with you so bad! i have sent you a message :)

Loved it. Very erotic! ★★★★★ (5.0 = 100%! 💚.

This story was very very well received by the users. As on Sep 21 2021 it had been favorited by 46 Literotica members out of 41.5k views; that is 1.11 "faves" per 1k views.

I gave it a 5.0 (❤💚❤💚❤)!

Excerpt from the story:

" I heard him undressing as he entered my bedroom. He wanted me reading the Koran so I continued to readily quietly. As he walked towards me I could hear his big dick slap against his thigh. It was a heavy thud every time it slapped against his thigh. This only caused my pussy to leak and throb more. I could feel a growing puddle at my feet created by my hungry cunt. It wanted to devour that monster dick."

Kinky (some of us like it that way.)

😊

Mmmmm so horny, as a muslim i know how bad those girls are

Ur just amazing.. write other parts with more of these things...hijabii innocant girls

An unusual topic, though a risky one that might cause unnecessary offence to strict Muslims. Admittedly very erotic and exciting, but probably also very unrealistic. Too much use of the same sexual trigger words. Written less dramatically and with more character development and more tact, it could even have become a good love story.