All Comments on 'The Perfect Slave'

the story is good but the spelling is so very important as it ruins a really good story. "stun gum" kind of takes away from the idea as you giggle instead of get turned on.... just a little advice.... JANE

i loved reading about the way His submissive lives to give Him pleasure. the intense training He gives really turned me on. spelling is important but the few mispelled words or typos didnt distract me because the story line held my interest! looking forward to reading more about this Master and His sub.

Please write more!!!!!!!!