All Comments on 'Earned'

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RonClarkesonRonClarkesonover 17 years ago
Not as good!

You need an editor! The missing capitals and story line are weaker here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
sick

This is not a relationship, damn near killing a submissive for your own pleasure, it's supposed to be about mutual care, concern, and trust

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