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by Anonymous

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by jthserra05/09/04

You do need to look inside

to truly understand the nature of the candy. Of course the bite will bring instant gratification, but what will you miss. There is more than what you let yourself see.

I think you are seeing it in poetry, as some of your recent poems exhibit. Let yourself see it elsewhere. Well done.

jim : )

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by bamagirl05/10/04

Cute~

Delightful little poem just the way it is.

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by Merrymaker05/10/04

You did much better...

the owl only makes it to three *wink*
Thanks for the smile.
~Merry

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