Seducing My Daughter

Amazing!

I love mother/daughter stories and definitely wish there were more of them on here. Great story!

Love Girl on Gurl Axtion

Love it when 2 girls get together. So pure sexual feelings. Especially mom and daughter. Now that is the purest sex on earth. I actually got hard so fast reading this.

Very nice

Very hot - and loving - at the same time.
Well done!
5 stars.

Loved it!

A great story! Girl on Girl is a real turn on! Please keep writing! Maybe mom & daughter can take on the college roommate? Please don't keep us waiting!

wow thanks for A GREAT STORY

was VERY well written.....please more very soon..

HALL OF FAME STORY!!

One of the best! Hope you write more soon!!!

Tender, sexy, beautiful

Felt as if I was really there observing the tension build and the fantastic release.

Loved it. Maybe a followup chapter where the college roommate comes to visit??

That was Amazing

Wow! What a story! One of the best ever. I'm now going to read the rest of your stories. Thank you

Awesome!

A wonderful story. Hope you have a follow-up.

HALL OF FAME STORY

Extremely well told, sequenced and moving. Grammar and spelling were outstanding. Gave it a 5. Would have given it more if there was a higher top number.

Very erotic.

I loved it!

So yummy!

And so wet! Thank you!

Awesome!

Excellent writing, very few typos, fantastic dialogue (real, believable) between two people who love each other. I'm pretty jaded and few stories get to me, but this one definitely did. This doesn't need to be a series, but I'd love to see a Part 2 that treats their expanding relationship. Well done!

Wow!

So many stories attempt to do what this one does. You are my new favorite on this site.

Well Done

I am by no means a critic, but this story, like so few, is actually believable. The pace was good, and it made you want for these two women to be together. Neither were degraded,they are just two women who are exploring perhaps a deeper bond than most.

Perfect

Very well done.

I like how you made it more about love making as opposed to just lustful fucking.

And I really appreciate the proof reading effort. There were a couple minor typos, really more grammatical errors that spell check wouldn't catch but still far fewer than I usually find in things like this so good on you for putting in that effort.

Really Good

I greatly enjoyed this story. I hope there is more. I like the idea of adding characters to it. Ruby's roommate for one. I can envision the Mother having a few fuck buddies around like a maybe a neighbor or two and maybe even former classmates of Ruby's from highschool. What would Ruby think or do to find out more about her Mother's prowlness for seducing other girls and women and who some of them are? Like maybe the preacher's wife or daughter or maybe a couple of her former teachers. Last of all maybe even a few mother, daughter combos. You could even add some toys and some light tie up games. I hope that you like some of these ideas.

So hott

Extraordinary. This is what a mother daughter story should be. Full of love and tenderness. Unashamed exploration for both mother and daughter. Please please please continue this storyline. Ruby has so much to learn from her mother. And the possibilities are endless for mom as she gets to know Ruby's friends too.

Wow

Couldn't get past them kissing! Amazing story and im only two thirds through, I'm going to keep the rest until later though 😊 bravo. Story line is spot on, so much so that i had a mother in daughter in mind during the whole story!

Very Good Story Line

Good Story Line: Well crafted well structured story Line : Explore this line very delicately. Not really Hot or Explosive. Yes the basic structure has been Laid for the story to move On....... To other possibilities.

Love it

I hope you keep the story going.