by FantasyStoryLover
Y cant u write many more pages at a time..... I give u that u have a good plot.... But this three single paged chapters are not acceptable.... Also try adding something erotic....
Do you plan on finishing this or add more, it’s good but way to short
I apologise for the long hiatus, but I just haven't been in a writing frame of mind for a while now. Writing was always my way to escape from real life, so when real life got interesting, writing fell to the wayside. I recently started reading what I'd written for this story all over again, and I found myself wanting to finish it, so that's what I'm going to try to do. I can't promise that I'll be successful in my attempt, but I do promise to try.
@Sxualchocol8: Thank you for those kind words.
@anon: You're not the only one who'd like longer chapters, but that simply isn't how my story flows. To compensate, I'm going to begin uploading multiple chapters under a single post. As for erotic content, I don't think this story will incorporate any of that (hence it's inclusion in the "Non-Erotic" category), but I never say never. If it feels right, and if the story calls for it, I might add something erotic after all.
@SavageGod12: I hope this comment answers your questions.
I don’t care how short a chapter is, as long as it is good and this goes way beyond qualifying. You seem to have a real winner here with the action, the intrigue, the suspense and a little comedy thrown in for fun...very nice.
J.D.