by Doctor O
A delightful...and very arousing...flight of fancy. The story line is credible and the anatomical descriptions are accurate (unlike a lot of authors). The steady build-up is delicious and, like foreplay, adds immeasurably to the effect. Sexual arousal and release are a feast to be savored slowly, not gulped down in a hurry.
Alas, Doctor O seems to have retired from writing erotica. Definitely our loss.
Would like to see a conclusion with them both getting together as an item and Steve having private massages and maybe getting married and Missy getting pregnant. Then there could even be other stories where they meet each others families and adventures happen with them.
Looking forward to the sequel when they fuck at her massage studio.
HOT...HOT...HOT!!!!!! This just a beginning though...hope you will give us more!!! Such an incredibly sublime story.
This is really a delightful story about two somewhat damaged people who are both remaking their lives. It is very good. The anatomy is amazing!
One of the hottest stories I've ever read here or anywhere! Fantastic writing! I woukd love more chapters about these two sexy people. Please write more. This was so incredible to read.
That was the hottest story this year!! Looking forward to more.
Forbidden love is always a turn-on, though I personally think that Missy & Steve belong together...
Please continue...
Very imaginative and refreshing story line. And one HOT story too!! Thanks for sharing.
Excellent story! Not the hottest on the site, but very arousing. What is best about this one is the ending. Two people have shared just about everything that two people can, but they still couldn't talk to each other, face to face, and engage in our oldest form of recreation. And we read about it on a site full of stories written by other people about fictional characters having imaginary sex. All of this technology, our worldwide web, making it possible to reach across the globe to anyone...and not actually meet them.
I loved this story! I love to be massaged and as I was reading I was imagining myself in Steve's place and it felt so erotic and sensuous...seriously arousing! Hmmmmm....:)
I can't help butt wonder how Steves next massage works out for him, I'm fairly certain he won't need his hands. Missy your curiosity took you to a better place, being slutty isn't the end of the order is it. What I wood give for a masseuse like you.
Thank you
I would love to experience that special massage some day. Very realistically written!
Very well written, & very erotic! Please continue the story, & have Missy try the "special techniques" she watched videos of.
thank-u for that story.i have suffered with this problem for many years since I was 20yrs old.i am now 70yrs. I myself can only relive myself under my scrotum your story has helped me. thank-u-very much for your help...............
had my wife read this - being a RN- she brought home a box of gloves and has tried the prostrate message and it actually has helped me- plus our sex life
Now that you have gotten us all off with this story, what are you going to do for an encore? 5*s all the way through.
Great story! I really enjoyed it. Would not mind trying that out myself. Look forward to reading more of your stories.
This was a great story with fantastic buildup and an nice ending. Would you please add another chapter?
this story is so stimulating. Please dont let us hang here, would love to see chapter 2, how they interact!
Awesome story and well written. I'm sure I'm not the only one hoping for a follow-up
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By far the best story I have read here! I'd love to read more chapters.
Thanks very much, you're a great writer.
The story was well written but far too long for such a small payoff. Why didn't they join each other and pleasure each other in person?
I loved the story overall. The characters were believable, the story was good, and the writing was excellent. You avoided a lot of common pitfalls that Literotica authors tend to fall into. I think Steve was conspicuously naive and apologetic in response to someone who, in real life standards, was giving some pretty strong and clear signals, but it wasn’t odd enough to detract from the story.
I’ve got a couple of more significant gripes with the last page. I’m not at all a fan of making sexual advances (with a non-spouse) while intoxicated, and it’s really bone-headed to masturbate on webcam if you’re not okay with the public seeing it. Those things aside, the story was excellent, and I’m definitely adding it to my Good Reads list. Best of luck to you!
Detumescing. Thanks for the vocabulary lesson. An excellent story, great job!
Average sorry - 3/5
Way too wordy and long winded, could have been half the length and just as effective.
I'm ready for Missy to massage me. hopefully home massages leading to more, LOL
I really loved the story! The writing was great. Would like to see more of Missy and Steve.
If l was giving Steve a prostrate massage ld be going as fast as could,pushing all that fluid out,then give him a steady of prostrate massages!!!!