by Miles63
I'm glad there was a better resolution than it looked like there would be. The story is very sexy as well.
First of all, yes I delete negative comments from my stories, especially when there is no constructive criticism. If it is only saying "this is shit" or "this is garbage" then I will delete said unnessary negative comment. Then to email me calling me out on deleting said comment & continuing to call it garbage is well over the line especially when you continue to remain anonymous which is cowardly.
Garbage? 13 loves & a rating of over 4.3 out of 5, clearly not everyone shares your opinion. Also if you hated the story why did you click on it again? How else would you know I deleted your comment? Get a life mate & if you're going to message me on my stories like that have the fucking balls to not be anonymous!
Screw the haters the entire story twist had me gripped firmly to this story from start to finish, it was an amazing concept and you should write more like it, possibly a sequel to this one
What a wonderful tale. The whole twist where David was actually a pawn and the real mastermind was Justin blew my mind. As an avid reader I tend to see a good plot twist coming from a mile out, but this one snuck up on me and I was surprised.
Very well done Miles, I cannot wait for your next story.
I don't got much to say except that this is amazing
I love stories with a relatively happy ending where people get together. They turned into a good couple in the end, which makes me feel warm inside. It was a bit dark, and I saw the twist coming as great a villain as David is people with access to drugs like that probably don't use skype. Regardless I had fun reading and -cough- anyway and haven't seen a story of this quality since TheTalkMans submissions.
Twists and turns that I didn't expect. So many of these stories follow the exact same story line. My only complaint was it was too short! Great job.
Good story it was actually very interesting and had dark twists, sexy in story structure and content. ( º ͜ʖ º )
I really enjoyed this story! I find some of the hard core servitude stories a bit cruel but I stayed up later then I should have to finish this one. Excilent job and of corse, very hot!
great story i wissi could become Terri in real life, i want to become a transgender female ❤️❤️❤️❤️
I wanted to read about him ripping fuckhead's dick off when the drug wore off. Dumb story. Hypnosis doesn't work like that.