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A true romantic...
You are my most favorite writer in Literotic no doubt. You have a definite flair for writing and know just how to bring out peoples feelings and hold their interest! Keep writing!!!
I am so happy to make your aquaintance!
You really draw your reader in. Well done. I could smell the wood fire, feel the coziness and the passion.
Touching...
It speaks of hope... thanks.
good story
It was a good story but I couldn't get over the misquotation of "The Highwayman." That poem is so beautiful that it is a shame to not get it right! But other than that great story, I really liked the characters.
Womderful Romantic Story...
Fabulious story of the beginning of young love. Maybe you could expand it into a novel length story of lovers. I enjoyed it all, and foregive you for taking writer's license to make the poem fit better in the story. Very, VERY good. 4/22/2016
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