All Comments on 'Thorn Ch. 43-49'

by JanuaryMoon1

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LilMissNerd1LilMissNerd1over 7 years ago
Aww

I loved this entire series, are you certain it had to end? I want to know what Shannon will look like, what will happen with the pack? I need to know these things!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

i started out loving this story. but then the updates became so far apart i lost interest. now the end just seemed to fall flat. but thank you for finishing it. if you decide to continue series, keep updates closer together please.

SherriTSherriTover 7 years ago
Love a good story

I have loved this story since I found it and he's taken months to read it and I will keep coming back to this because it's going into one of my favorites I hope you do a sequel or maybe even continue this.

JanuaryMoon1JanuaryMoon1over 7 years agoAuthor
Response

Sherri & Lilmiss - I will be writing about the pack again - thanks for reading and offering your encouragement

Anon - as I work fulltime, have a family and a health condition that sometimes leaves me unable to use my arms or legs I am actually okay with how long it took to complete this story - I do however apologize to anyone who read this far and then found the ending flat ... Without a major tragedy or huge drama not sure how the end could be more exciting but I guess someone may give me some feedback on this .... I thought ending with the wedding was enough - however I have already started fixing some errors and may tweak a few bits I feel are a bit rushed

izzieDizzieDover 7 years ago
Now just a blasted minute here!!!

Now I know you're not going to leave me wondering, are you? There are too many loose ends and unrevealed incidents that I've been on tender hooks to see unveiled!

What of Alex n his mission? Why happens with John's bunch? What's the plan for bringing Aaron and Kate up to scratch? See?? Just too much left undone to stop already! One or two more chapters should do it!! *joker grin*

Anxiously awaits,

Izzie

OAN: Wishing you well and that your health issues are resolved or at the very least relieved!

oneoflifesjewelsoneoflifesjewelsover 7 years ago
A truly wonderful story!

Thank you for letting us know that you will be revisiting the pack. I would love to read how things have gone several years down the line! Be well.

OddBall68OddBall68over 7 years ago

I hope to see more of your writing in the future. Maybe a pack ride in a future work? Shame all three of them couldn't have ended up with pups seeing as how Luna got them in heat at the same time. Would make for close playmates and the beginning of the next generation's circle.

JanuaryMoon1JanuaryMoon1over 7 years agoAuthor
Responses

Izzie - I swear you'll get answers, and probably more questions. I have a plan for the next series to feature many bits glossed over in this one. I have ideas for stories for all of the core but not all will be this long. I also have a plan involving a next generation story.

Oneoflifesjewells - thank you.

Oddball - your ongoing support means so much. I have kept your email and am so pleased you are still reading

OddBall68OddBall68over 7 years ago

Back stories would be great, and sad i could imagine. There is likely great pain in some histories.

Your writing and a few others on this site have me itching to create. I've only ever written poems and they took hours to get thoughts into words so i know your writing pace would look like lightning compared to me. Not sure if I'm Cecil Turtle or Beaky Buzzard speed. lol

JanuaryMoon1JanuaryMoon1over 7 years agoAuthor
Where to now?

Well I've been torn between a few characters and unsure which would be my next focus, but it looks like Aaron has chosen to hound me till I had no choice but to put my other ideas aside and pay him some attention - I have just submitted the start of his story. I know it will be a big surprise, not, but I've titled the new series .... Aaron LOL

j76475j76475over 7 years ago
Great Story

Have just finished this complete story. Very good and really enjoyed it. I hope you continue with the new family or possibly some history on individuals. Most likely the best bet is Mother Luna and the gifts she has and her pack. Thank you.

MarkamycoleMarkamycoleover 7 years ago
Great idea

Continue with Aaron and. Kate. Show some of the core nenbers a little.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wtf

Thats the ending?? Surely there should be like season two or something. Right?!

Ginger630Ginger630over 3 years ago
Wow!

I totally binged this story in one day. So amazing!

It would be awesome to see the story continue. I love Thorn & Luna!!!!

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