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All Comments on 'Have an Open Mind'

by AnalMajor

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Good idea

Good idea, could have used more editing, and the point of view really didn't flow right.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Is there a part 2?

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AnalMajorAnalMajorover 7 years agoAuthor
Didn't flow right How?

I'm open for suggestions and yes there is more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Sweet?

How about 'suite' to reference the room! Work on your vocabulary!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Not possible

Not possible for this to get the rating it has without people ignoring the grammatical errors and rushed plot.

I like the premise, but it is much too rushed and needs an editor.

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