Good idea, could have used more editing, and the point of view really didn't flow right.
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I'm open for suggestions and yes there is more
How about 'suite' to reference the room! Work on your vocabulary!
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Good idea
Good idea, could have used more editing, and the point of view really didn't flow right.
Is there a part 2?
3
Didn't flow right How?
I'm open for suggestions and yes there is more
Sweet?
How about 'suite' to reference the room! Work on your vocabulary!
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