Very interesting in a teasing kind of way..... Amy desperately needs a new friend and perhaps, she has just met one?
This story deserves more development and I wonder if the schoolgirl will become a prominent figure?
Excellent writing!
I can just picture a straight laced, middle aged married woman being played with by a much younger school aged girl, but playing with her once on the crowded train would need to be just the first step in her conversion. Wondering what the woman might do next, now that she's had a taste of what's possible.
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Anonymous09/22/16
Very good description.
I was there on the train with them, watching every move. Well done!
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Anonymous09/22/16
Deliciously naughty!
Please tell us more! Five stars from me -- thank you.
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Very.....
Very interesting in a teasing kind of way..... Amy desperately needs a new friend and perhaps, she has just met one?
This story deserves more development and I wonder if the schoolgirl will become a prominent figure?
Excellent writing!
Interesting first step
I can just picture a straight laced, middle aged married woman being played with by a much younger school aged girl, but playing with her once on the crowded train would need to be just the first step in her conversion. Wondering what the woman might do next, now that she's had a taste of what's possible.
Very good description.
I was there on the train with them, watching every move. Well done!
Deliciously naughty!
Please tell us more! Five stars from me -- thank you.
Delicious
Got my juices flowing - more please
knickers wet also
really enjoyed and looking forward to next part
A nice start!
I hope it continues! Thank you!
Very very erotic, promises a lot more
Nice. Very nice
Where?
Wish you'd told us which Southern station this girl gets on the train at....
Great build up, amazing fantasy for that to happen
Looking forward to how the relationship develops
Read this on the bus to work I will be taking the train home tonight, thanks
Plausible
Sexy, exciting, very well written and ... mmmm... so believably plausible.
Southern are the worst.
Oh so sensual
Such a sensual story, beautifully told, thank you
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