All Comments on 'My Neighbor's Shenanigans'

One of the most erotic and sensuous seduction stories I have ever read. Will there be more from Jason, Sarah and her friends?

Steamy sexy fun.

More!

Inventive, sensual and very erotic without being crude. More!

Best I've read in a long time!

Gabriella is a woman's name that can be shortened to Gabby.

looks like a good one for additional chapters!

I started this story and could not stop reading. It moved along well and had enough intrigue that was wondering what was around the next corner. The women were well-described and fit perfectly into their roles. Thank you.

Wow this is the best I have seen in a long time. Excellent and writing flows well. I am going to be waiting for more adventures with the two neighbors.

You do know how to word a picture...

Well written, everything nice, easy, and an all round good read!

Great story. I know it has only been out a few days but I'm already wishing there was a part two out for this story.

Definitely keep up the great writing.

Great story. Great length. I came 3 times reading this.

Normally, I like the shorter stories. This one was so damn good, I couldn't stop reading. I hope you continue the story line on this couple. Truly marvelous.

Great story, nice build-up.

Gabriella or Gabrielle, not Gabriel. I would use the former because you described her as Latina. I was confused about the person at first, and thought you were describing a homosexual couple until "she began to remove her bikini".

Otherwise this was a great tale well told.

Wow, that was a good story. So good that this is the first time I'm even bothering to comment on here. I came 3 times reading this.

I don't think Gabby was the only one who came thrice!

I did too! I came and came so hard! Thank you thank you

Loved every second of it, please, part 2, 3, 4, etc... ;)

Five stars. More please.

Your active duty is impressive,love to see the film!

great story

Every guys fantasy! Wouldn't it be nice if people would just enjoy life like that...

Aww, you have to finish the story! There has to be MORE! Keep writing!!

Loved it, definitely need a chapter two (and three). Love the writing style.

Was it just me or did his name change from Jason to David?

Definitely needs a second chapter. The whole story seems to lead up to Jason and Sarah finally spending a night of bliss together, but when that finally comes to be, the story just ends. Excellent story, though. Hope this helps. Semper Fidelis.

Very arousing writing!

Make a 2nd part pleasee!!!

Need more to many loose ends.... Need a they lived happily ever after.... More...

Ditto the thanks to your editor. Best crafted I've read here. And a great story as well.

a very hot story!

How could things go on?

Sarah will sit on bed, his head between her leg for her first orgasm. The second one with him lying on bed and riding his face.

In my miind is a little education for Joseph. His affair should take things in her hands, having him bound to bed and giving lections in licking. Maybe all others from party join them, so he can taste different women. And finally for revange his wife gets fucked in front of him by Sarahs friend and later his wife mounts his lips to clean her

Love this building fantasy. Would enjoy much more, your writing is expressive and novel, characters cheeky and believable. I look forward to more.

If only that kind of shit really happened.

More - More - More!!!

Sounds like a nice evening. I would put all 3 fine asses on the couch and worked the line.

Great build up of tension, and great ending.

Looking forward to the sequel ?

I wiish I was THERE! Especially liked the parts where she is sleeping and gets "waked up". For sure a fantasy of mine! I hope that has happened to you. Lots.

Awesome story!!!! Great want to read more !!!!

Exciting fast paced and well written. One of my favorites.

Really great. I don't often read a story this long without skimming a bit, but you had me hooked. Great work

You had me sopping wet and dripping on my mattress. I'd love to be Sarah or David, fuck, Sarah especially. I was on the edge of orgasm the whole time I read this (and broke out the old vibe). Great work! Sequal??

You had me dripping wet and I'm a guy!

Pushed a lot of buttons... Thank you!

Really good read. Love your writing style and enjoyed every word. Keep up the good work.

that was so good I could smell them looked for some thing lick.

This was damn well done. Characters are realistic and seem like you could communicate with them

Rocked it. You obviously have a talent for communicating and connecting with people. Thanks a lot for the gift

Brilliant Story

Wanked over this

dammit that was hot, great detail and content, had me excited from start to finish.

Great story with great detail. I enjoyed it from start to finish and I cannot wait to read your next story. You really got me hard!

Great build up and good writing, a couple of typos but that is being picky.

Thanks for the read

Wow, what a story! Great job keeping it real, erotic, and moving along. It never got tedious and I kept reading, ready for more. Love this!

This was a great story. WELL written, awesome visual, great content. I think it's time for chapter two. You wrote about the guy waking up tied to the bed with the neighbor standing over her. Write that story as an extension to this one. Please...

It's been a while since I've Edited anything. I'd like to Be your editor...

Wish I could give you a ten! Wonderful characters and great action!

and the story still works well. Excellent descriptions, easy to read, fun sexual arousal story and an excellent conclusion.

Really loved this story! I hope you continue by filling in the details of what happened when they hit the bedroom.

This is the best story I have read on here. It was erotic without being crass, incredibly arousing and wonderful to read. Your descriptions set every scene perfectly and you managed to captivate me from the first paragraph. So many stories on here are plotless, characterless devices for sharing sexual fantasies but this story really spoke of erotic longing and the desire to experiment. I loved it. Thank you.

about 100 more pages. Awesome stuff. Very hot. Loved it.

Enjoyed reading it

Best story I have ever read, here or anywhere. You are truly an artist.

Clearly one of the best stories I have ever read here, and would read ten follow ups if you wrote them!!! Sarah is one hot little kitten!!

Excellent write about real and believable people, not just sex. Great job and thanks.

mmmmhmm that was beautiful. nice story and needs more. fuck sarah is one scorching hot babe

Realized in the beginning that I already read this story. That didn't stop me from reading it again. Great story. Excellent detail and depth. I hope there are more adventures with these characters.

Great story, I hope there's more to come!

This is a really hot story, but the ending is abrupt. I would love to read a Part 2 that continues where this one leaves off. At the very least, the only sex we've had between Sarah and David was in the pool and it would be nice to read about their night. It would also be good to see where this goes with the others. Will this be a one-time thing or is it the beginning of a poly-amorous relationship where all four are lovers? Please write more about these characters!

Really loved reading this story. really well written and really well thought out. I do hope to see a continuance to this great story. even into a series would be great to see if possible if not maybe the same story but from the point of view of Sarah instead of David.

Great story want to hear more

Great job, thanks.

Great story! Would be great to hear more...maybe from one of the other characters or a certain amount of time in the future. I enjoyed it! Great detail too.

Excellent build-up and slow release. Great job. Thx.

The story was really great.

The build-up to David and Sarah meeting was nice and the interaction between them and the others was also great.

Any chance of seeing the story continued and seeing what will happen between David and Sarah next and to see how their relationship will develop? And to also see what will happen with Gabrielle and Shayna?

Good luck and happy writing.

First off I’ve never commented on anyone’s story but I just could not go without giving a shout out on this story. I really hope that this will become a series of stories or at least have a sequel. This story was fantastic, GREAT job!

I am in agreement with the rest of the commenters - there needs to be at least a "My Neighbor's Shenanigans, Part 2" - you gave us all the shenanigans in great detail, but ended before the final consummation of Sarah and David - at least the less exhibitionistic kind - it could end after they both collapse from exhaustion or could begin a new chapter when the forgotten girls wake them up in the morning - good story tho - keep up the good work

Best story ever!

The build up, the excitement, the fun, the feelings, everything!! Yes, that was really something! Thank you!!

Absolutely glorious! One of the best stories ever!

Thanks for your service! I hope you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading it.

We've been waiting for 2 years for the next round of shenanigans to begin! Please tell us you will have them soon.

WOW X soooooooooo good x so wanted this to hppen to me and my G/F xxx so easy to read more more more please

Damn, that's one helluva story.

Loved it!

Great writing. Great story!

Please give us more of the story of Sarah and David!

Absolutely fantastic!! Thank you!

First time poster and new user of this site. Amazing! Love your style.

You did a good job here. You addressed some interesting issues, like cheating, guilt, and promiscuity, in a way that was obviously erotic, but without being smutty and crude. Your protagonist David, while knowingly engaged in a harem situation, still gave attention to each of the participants, showing that he still had a conscience, and wasn't just trying to take advantage of them. I'm impressed.

Very erotic... nice build to an amazing climax...

One of the longer stories I enjoyed. I came halfway through, came back later for the rest and came again. Tastefully done!

The title of my comment pretty much sums it up. You set the tone for David's approach right at the beginning, without any childish sentiment. A very mature, interesting, erotic and (frankly) well written short story. I look forward to reading your others as well. Thank you...this story took a lot of effort, and it shows.

Great story. Would love to see a sequel to this one.

Please write more! Loved every paragraph

Loved the story! Well written! I’ll be looking for more of your work!

Very well written and entertaining!

Because you stopped waiting for more about these two possibly where you left off. Very well done!!

Story is greatly written-ish. Characters well described and believable, story-line progresses beautifully.

One thing though: what's with the changing of tense, sometimes even within the same paragraph. Decide whether the story is told in present tense, or in past tense - then STICK TO IT.

This gives words like copy-paste a need to evolve - copy-paste-edit...

Title says it all. Enjoyed and believed in the story start to finish. covered many aspects .Well done !

Not only was this story deliciously written, I loved how respectful it was to women in general and the characters specifically. Rarely do you read a story with this much tension when all the players involved are completely consensual, but this made me realize just what I've been missing in my erotica my entire life. Truly, game-changing literature.

Will rank among the best on Literotica. Sadly max five stars are permitted !!!

Lease continue, exceptional character development, deserves to be continued.

Well written, great story line, and something that every hot blooded person would like to have happen to them.....REALLY ENJOYED THE STORY.

it's crazy how awesome this was to read. I actually just wanna know what happens next beyond my own pleasure. I know we're all here for the lust, but I hope Sarah and David can find something romantic with one another! :)

The character development is fabulous.. Its a perfect amount of true sensualism and not just sex.. I wish this continues.. Favourite yet.. Wowww

Very well written and edited. Development and story pace were both right on. My minds eye was very busy. You could almost smell the chlorine and sex in the air. There MUST be a continued story.

Appreciative reader! I love the slow build where are you introduce characters well explaining their desires. I felt the tension, excitement and release well I followed along imagining to be each character.

Such an enjoyable as well as Long masturbation session. Nicely done my friend.

Please continue the series; really enjoyed many of yours, but love these! We have not had a really personal description of what it's like to fuck Sarah, nor has she been involved in bondage much. I'd love to see her get a surprise one night when Shayna sleeps over, and then ties Sarah up, blindfolds her, and while riding her face David comes over and fucks them both.