way too short, I'm surprised you made a one page chapter.
It is what it is. There is more to come, but with lots of new characters I feel it is best to spread their introductions out in different chapters. Some readers don't seem to be able to cope with too many characters at once.
Short but still hot, introducing New character's graduly is good.
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way too short, I'm surprised you made a one page chapter.
Short?
It is what it is. There is more to come, but with lots of new characters I feel it is best to spread their introductions out in different chapters. Some readers don't seem to be able to cope with too many characters at once.
Short but still hot, introducing New character's graduly is good.
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