All Comments on '39 and Liberated Pt. 01'

Great first effort. More fun for the lady to Cum I hope.

You've posted this story before. I'm curious why you posted it again. Did you rewrite it? I did enjoy this story the first time I read it, but I don't believe a second chapter was ever posted.

Deal with your marriage then move on, no thanks.

They just complain to compete with each other in who is the biggest jerk-off.

Good start to a story of redemption from an asshole spouse, looking forward to more. Hot description of the action in the truck.

5/5

Haven't I read this before somewhere?

This marriage was dead for a long time and already stinking...All she had to do is ask for a divorce and go on with her life...No need for this fucking around while still married, putting herself at the low level of her husband...2*

When the make protagonist in a story by one of the "greats" on this site starts his new relationship before his divorce, the anons come out of the woodwork to say that since the wife voided the marriage first, nothing he did is adultery now.

Switch the roles, and suddenly she's "as bad as him" and she's a slut for not filing first.

Interesting. I'm sure someone will rush in to explain this double standard as something other than rank sexism, but I don't see how.

Is this about a hookup with a tow truck driver? Like Erotic Couplings?

Is this about a wife committing adultery?

Is this about a husband committing adultery, driving the wife to commit adultery?

Is this a budding romance?

I feel badly the husband is a cheating neglectful sack of shit. Usually pussy hounds are all over a gorgeous piece of ass, even if they are married to it. So while the husband may be unethical and unlovable, its for sure he's really really stupid.

Maybe that's what this story is about? Either too obscure or too deep for me. But thanks for the time and effort.

I have read this story before, not new

This isn't a person writing. This is an experiment in artificial intelligence technology and writing a story.

Sorry folks, no person here.

I love the story. Young men are the best for long lasting, quick recovery sex. Omg such a hot idea. Excellent story xoxoxoxo Annette

Congrats!!!

You've left me hanging. Please finish the story. You write amazingly well. The mechanics like spelling, grammar, word usage are great and make it so easy to get into the story. You have skills at telling stories. It feels so immediate, like it is happening in real time. This is one of my favorites of the whole LW section. I think I'm in love!

Loved this story. What did it for me was how your husband had been treating you and what you eventually did about it. That did it for me. The back seat sex was great also, it's just that I didn't really need it. Just hearing you or him mentioning your husband while at the same time enjoying yourself was all I needed. Thank you Amy for a great story. Hope you finish it someday.

Hot as hell story. Really to bad it's not finished. 4 stars.

I do hope that you'll continue to tell us :what happened next" I hope that in real life you have cast off the chains of your barren and unsatisfying marriage and are now running wild and free.

I really wish that you would finish this story and write more; we need Matt to relentlessly fuck your pussy. We need more hot babes (like myself, ha, ha) writing on this site. Obviously 5*

That was soooo hot.

Great story, HOT, well written, enables one to picture the event in your minds' eye.

Going to be continued HUH???? I wish you would have but does not look like it!

Great story. Alas, incomplete. And you describe events so well and there is just so much a "Liberated" could achieve. One lives in hope!!

Hope to see more.

Fantastic and convincing writing! Eager for more.

Writing is well above average and would certainly merit additional exploration. Unfortunately, it seems as if this will be a one-and-done composition. Not sure if you'll even get these comments. But you've offered a realistic and compelling plot and characters. Many thanks for the time and effort it all took.