All Comments on 'Deadly Friends/Unexpected Enemies 03'

FS,

You have blown me away! Action, magic, love and even, strangely enough for this website, SEX!!! I am so blown away!

Great stuff, James!!!

Was sad at the quick death of Armand, but the real fight is with Salvador and the Council of Night. A lot of interesting people coming into this, I like the Were-Fox. Very good addition.

the Council of Night choose the wrong target.

It was a pleseant surprise to find this new chapter.

You are a Master Writer!

Great writing as usual, good pickup to an interesting tale/tail.

I love a good us vs. the odds story, especially with smexy characters.

So good to see this story getting some attention again.

Sex with a vampire and a witch!

I can see how making love with the witch feeds her tantric energy and therefore makes her more powerful (great excuse at parties btw)

What is going on with vampire sex? And if human semen does mystical things and amps up a vampire what happens to the poor straight males ?

Perhaps Tessio's cousin and a new male ally of Marrisa will let us find out...

Five stars

An excellent story that I read through in a few days time on discovering it. Sad that I am already done reading it, but hoping that there is more to come.

As an aside you have an excellent story telling ability with your books / series rivaling the modern day best sellers such as JK Rowling, Tom Clancy and on the same level as Burroughs or Tokein.

Am reading your stories and got started on this one,,,really hope you can continue it. Thank you for your time and effort put forth for your readers...

Don’t waste your time. It’s a great HALF story.

4 years and unfinished.

Literotica needs to make authors marks a story as complete somehow, check box or something. Then if incomplete after a year the story should be automatically deleted.

Incomplete stories are the bane of Literotica.

It’s a GREAT shame that this story, and others, are incomplete. And that is a great tragedy to many readers. Even then it’s one of the most interesting on this site (as noted by the HIGH rating). The authors on this site are kind enough to share their efforts with the rest of us. It’s a GIFT.

If YOU can write a better story, or even a average story, go ahead. THEN you “might” have reason to complain. Until then, SIT down and SHUT up.

You accept a GIFT and then complain? That is just poor manners and you should leave.

Unto FinalStand. My humble thanks for sharing your skills and imagination with those of us who cannot craft such works. PLEASE take care of your Health and Family. Your sharing is much appreciated by many. I offer you Blessings and Well Wishes.

I can’t imagine the effort or strain spinning such yarns as you have shared!

Be well, love well, and prosper.

- pal

Psst, I learned what a “folly” is due to this story. Neat

Love this, excellent story telling

I would really love to see this continue, please take care of yourself and your health and i hope 2019 brings blessings and healing

This would make a great series of books or a mini Netflix series am already thinking of casting suggestions

Great story.

So good!!!

It's not just incomplete it's horribly incomplete when you post a story knowing your literally going to stop posting only a 3rd of the way into the story it's tantamount to pissing in someone's cornflakes!