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oh god yes.. please more
yup.. well written not too base not rude just earthy and silky and wonderful.. i want more...
Hell yes, I'd like to see more!
Great job on the story :) Loved every second I spent reading it... I really hope you decide to continue it!
Wet all the way through....
I truely loved it. I am rereading Ann Roquelaure (Rice) Sleeping Beauty trilogy at the moment and it reminded me a bit of that but better. This writer should write professionally!
best erotic writing
it was awesome. breathtaking you should keep writing this story.
wonderful
Wonderful!
I loved every second of this story! I really hope you make a chapter two to follow through with the promise the queen made. :]
please, please, please!
Can't wait to read more!
Hot,Hot,Hot!!!
Loved it! Please continue.
A beautiful story
You should continue this story. You can't leave us all hanging. This is only chapter one. Please...More''''
you got me so hot, please continue
Need more and more and more!!!!!
cute!
aw!!!!!!!
how sweet i loved it and the hotness and the intensity
of it
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Awsome story I would love to see a sequel to this.
Lovely
This should be continued...
Perfect
I would love for there to be a sequel. I love this story.
Please continue
amazing
amazing start but please continue would love to see how it ends
awesome
this is so awesome. u shuld do another one
More!
There has to be more to this?? Surely! :D
Continue it
PLEASE CONTIUNE
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