All Comments on 'The Brain of Piacenza Ch. 03'

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hornacekhornacekover 7 years ago
back on track

This chapter seemed like a good course correction after Mason, the main character in chapter one, got sidelined and became a secondary character (and a victim) in chapter two. Glad to see that all the complaints about chapter two didn't fall on deaf ears.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 7 years ago
Well done!

Not usually a fan of mindless revenge but Monica definitely deserves something for trying to ruin other people's lives.

Not sure where you're going to go with this but looking forward to the next chapter.

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