All Comments on 'Mark of the Incubus Ch. 11'

by ErosinaScarlett

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Hmm

Honestly, I'm not really liking the inclusion of Vesta, Michelle, and even Nolan in the whole mix.

I was more intrigued with the pairing of Agnes and James from the beginning. These other characters' sexual connection to them on the other hand feels like it was just suddenly thrown in to make it a bigger story than what was implied through the first chapter. Not a bad thing, but it's just not my cup of tea.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Interesting

I like the way it's going. Gives the story more depth and twist. Can't wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Amazing! Love that twist, it's getting crazy! Can't wait for the next chapter

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