All Comments on 'Seducing Jenna'

I hope you will continue this story, I had multiple orgasms reading this.

Thanks

Absolutely brilliant! Such detailed vivid descriptions of both Jenna's body and the sex. I love oral sex stories and you definitely delivered. My favourite story so far, I had a great orgasm! Keep writing!

An excellent start to this story! Please continue! Thank you!

Enjoyed reading this very hot sensual story and the seduction. In fact, to me it was so good I would love for you to write many more chapters about how these two continue their relationship. Also to read how far Beth can push Jenna into total submission and maybe go into Jenna's growing need to have passionate sex with Beth.

Please keep this wonderful story going with many more chapters.

Good story loved the seduction scene

it reminds me of another story on here also, but the girl was selling magazine subscriptions for her school, but still not bad

I hope this story continues. Lots of possibilities here. Maybe Jenny brings her friend by next time for assistance in seducing her. Maybe a neighborhood Milf or two could be seduced. Could even be the preacher's hot wife or daughter. Maybe even Jenny seduced a teacher or two.

The story was enjoyable and well written. For me the only drawback was that Jenna seemed to be just a teeny bit too eager to be seduced. I would have liked to see Beth have to work just a bit harder.

Nonetheless I would definitely read more of your work.

While the actual writing was perfectly fine, I found the story heavy-handed and abrupt. The slam-bam pace didn't appeal to me, and I didn't fine the story as a whole very arousing.

Three stars. Didn't love it. Didn't hate it. It was just ok and ok works for me right now. Is there a part 2 on the way.

I declare myself a fan of well-written lesbian stories, with details of rough sex. I like to read with my girlfriend while we give each other pleasure. It's addictive!!!

Continue your story with many chapters, dear Brooke Jones.

Two lesbians will thank you.

Loved it, but want to read the next chapters before committing my comments.

Has me hooked so far, found it really turning me on.

Loved it. I love to see two women really enjoy themselves. You are a great teacher. Now finish this story. Thanks

I loved the story. It starts slow but finishes fast.

There's nothing like a young girls pussy.as far as I'm concerned.

The innocence of Jenna in the beginning was the key to me.

My pussy was throbbing and gushing from thinking about what they were doing

I came as much as Jenna did leaving me spent and gasping for breath.

Thanks for a great story and a great way to wake up to

OMG ! ... What a wonderful story ! ... Seduction of young gals into lesbian life is so exciting, and satisfying and you know their lives will be so much richer for it.

Great story. I couldn't stop reading it and wanted it to go on and on

I especially loved the discription of how innocent Jenna was when she stripped her clothes off so that Beth could see what she looked like

The way that you described how her eighteen year old pussy looked like made it seem like I was there looking at it with her

There's nothing like a young innocent inexperienced pussy and the way that it looks especially if she's still a virgin and the way that you described how Jenna's pussy looked it sounded like she is

That was fucking hot!!!!

very erotic, job well done, I loved it, hot and seductive. my favorite pair to read about.

A beautiful story, beautifully written.

Jenna is so cute. Her mother would be proud...Hahahaha

OOO WEE!!! That was so HOT...

5🌟's

Short and ohhhh so sexy.

Unless / until someone identifies the biological source and mechanism by which it somehow functions. It LOOKS like piss, is the consistency of piss, and tastes like piss… IT'S URINE ffs...

please continue and bring her friend

Very well written and engaging, would love a continuation of this. there is so much more sweet sapphic love to show these young women.

“Did you like that?” “Do you want me to continue?” Who says getting consent can’t be sexy? Very nicely done.

Great story i loved it read the story is they a next part

Wow, just excellent!

Love the general seduction bit but felt that the sudden harshness was unlikely to be viable.

That is a sexy story and well written too.

Compliments to the author!