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Don't
bother.
WTF
# 1
Mental illness is not erotic.
Not that you would care or notice. Really awful characters, just a total waste of space and effort.
Welcome Back!!
Anither hot update!!!!
Please have the son join, and eventually use her, degrade her, and make her his submissive whore!
?????
When is the Son getting Mum?
A neverending lousy story and a neverendings of 1*'s...
A neverending lousy story and a neverendings of 1*'s...No more comments...
Awesome!!
favorite series is back running again. hope you start publishing regular updates again!!
What a crap and ugly story!
It seems to be the author has some cuckold issues mixes with gay issue that were transported to this garbage story.
This story lacks of creativity, it is poor written, low content, shallow context and it is not even nor nor sexy story.
This story is not enjoyable and wasted time reading all the way through.
4/5
Happy that another one of my favourite multi chapter stories is finally continuing. However, have to say that this current arc is getting dull and repetitive. Hope to see a new direction in upcoming chapters. Sex is still erotic as anything on literotica though!
Hot, sexy Singapore story!
ive just read through your entire series and am a huge fan. as a caucasian expat living in Singapore, I can attest to the fact that some of the rich local housewives are total sluts. Maybe ive even slept with the writer's mum before. keep up the great writing!
you need a story
You need a storyline. Make some drama or something else, but you can't go on like this. The storyline involving the arab sheikhs was a good start, but you could have done more out of it. You should try some character developement as well. Maybe your actors make some bad decisions that have some bad consequences.But you really have to do some kind of storydevelopement. You can take your actors and put them in different context. The same sexual encounters with the same persones in the same location under the same circumstances is awefully boring. And I tell you this, because i really like the premise of your work - the idea of a promiscuous and cheating housewife/milf and her encounters.
Too bad to comment...
Too bad to comment...
Probably the greatest series on literotica
Fervently looking forward to the next big arc of the story. Erotica wise, this is probably the best written fap material ever. Kudos the the writer for his multi year commitment to this series, keep going!
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