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by smalltownpa09/29/16

Get some help!!

After reading a couple of your stories, I suggest you get an editor to help you. Either English is not your first language or you have very limited writing experience. Your stories read like a rough draft or an article that would appear in a newspaper. There is very little if any back round about the characters, the dialog is very limited, and there are spelling and grammatical errors.On your next story, take your time, picture yourself as the main character and think what you would say and how you would act.
Again,PLEASE do yourself and the readers a big favor and get an editor to proofread before you submit your next story

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