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by BJGoodhead09/30/16

Ah hah

That was humor...and satire...and not too shabby.

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by SCM_AUTHOR10/05/16

Dialogue

Thought it was great. Got me going and I enjoyed the banter going on between the ladies. The only thing that put me off a little was that it wasn't always clear who was speaking. Nevertheless, Farah's fellatio photo will stick with me for some time to come.

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by Anonymous10/10/16

That photo

Two striking features: unlike most porn, it adopts a fly-on-the-wall perspective, and it relies mostly on dialogue. The talk is crisp and convincing. And, yes, I would love to see Farah with her face covered. I smiled and hardened as I read. More, please!

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