All Comments on 'Wish You Knew Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
decent start, could turn interesting.

note to author should add the "blackmail" tag to the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
more

Hopefully this gets more than one chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Masterful, Intriging Tale of Mystery

Poor Chloe. What's a cheerleader to do!!! Make sure to hold out for top dollar on movie rights.

cowbullscowbullsover 7 years ago
incomplete

I might love this but you didn't do anything with the first chapter. Zero action gets you a 1.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
A 5 to balance the 1.

Good characterization and prose, and an intriguing start. A slow burn isn't a bad thing.

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