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Wish You Knew Pt. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/26/16

decent start, could turn interesting.

note to author should add the "blackmail" tag to the story.

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by Anonymous09/27/16

more

Hopefully this gets more than one chapter.

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by Anonymous09/29/16

Masterful, Intriging Tale of Mystery

Poor Chloe. What's a cheerleader to do!!! Make sure to hold out for top dollar on movie rights.

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by cowbulls10/01/16

incomplete

I might love this but you didn't do anything with the first chapter. Zero action gets you a 1.

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by Anonymous01/24/17

A 5 to balance the 1.

Good characterization and prose, and an intriguing start. A slow burn isn't a bad thing.

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