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Dream Night

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by Anonymous

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by tarablackwood2205/13/04

Nicely done.....

....full of longing and ache.

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by Merrymaker05/13/04

Dreams

Such fickle things at times, like an image captured in a bubble, look quick before it bursts. I love the phrase
"while morning rays
called us awake
splitting us back in two"....nicely done.
~Merry

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