Husband's Revenge Ch. 03

I got to the ten inch cock

It was great until then. When it fell off that cliff, I decided to save myself.

Well, you had a great title

Sadly it all went to hell after that.

10 inch cock...like the other comment said, over you writers insisting on 10 inch cocks.

just can't do it

Well.....I started reading this part before I backtracked to read the whole three parts. Glad I waited. The writer lost me with Fred's 10" dick. 1*

Now we know...

Now we know...Like mother like daughter!! This part was more about incest than any other thing...And again a weak story...1*

Bozhe Moi

How is this revenge again?

Stop writing now please

10 inch dick? Please get real.

well your proof

that anyone can write but you and most others can't.

well looks like the tables are turning.

Get an editor

Your story premise has potential, but it's a tough read due to all the mistakes. Find someone to help you out and then improve.

AGAIN AGAIN

You idiots that think you know so much and complain day after day about every story and yet come back for more need help.
ITS A FREE SEX SITE WITH JUST AMATEUR WRITERS.
GOD GET A LIFE.

Do you even read what you write before you post it?

I can't believe that you do. Otherwise, there wouldn't be non-sense sentences like these (cut and pasted here with no change):

"Jim tell me how bad you to fuck me."

"Why did you guys what to add this hung cock here."

I don't know anybody who would act like this.

I don't know anybody who would have this fantasy, a real turn off. Yuck.

Fantastic!!!

Congratulations!!!

1*

fag cuck shit.

Is it too much to ask

To at least keep the tenses straight? First, it's "I did this", then it's "Jim did this". Doesn't matter, I guess, lousy story anyway.

Revenge in Chap 4

No revenge yet. Must be in the next chapter

Good story, but...

The story is good but all the spelling mistakes take the enjoyment out of reading the story.