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Twerk, Little Sister Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous09/27/16

Hopefully he knocks her up.

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by Anonymous09/27/16

You need to continue this story with many more chapters. Dont rush the story. Hoy

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by prop6909/27/16

Good story, but too short

You went to fucking sister too soon. No build-up. Have they had sex before? Have they had any sex before. A little fast to go so quickly to fucking. Still would love to fuck his sister

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by TheOldRomantic09/28/16

Good story, but short

Good story, but short and maybe little fast development.
I hope you write more chapters, more long and developing more the relationship.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

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by Anonymous09/28/16

Welp, walk in on the bounce

Pants drop and have her flounce

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by jtw097809/29/16

Yep

Please continue this one

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by Anonymous12/22/16

Hot Story!

I love anal, & I love the lust that siblings can give to each other! I don't normally give 5* tp a single pager, But yours was hot enough to deserve one. Keep up the lusty level or your stories.

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by Anonymous02/24/17

Hygiene...

Anal sex right into vaginal sex? Without even a blowjob inbetween?

That sounds like grounds for a quick and not fun infection for her.. She surely didn't prep before this encounter for his cock to go into her ass. Can you edit the story to add SOME WAY for his cock to be cleaned before it repenetrated her vagina?

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