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HOT ,HOT
Good story and thanks for sharing it with us
Just wish Impo and his group of haters would go back to their Baby Book Club
and leave the adults alone..
@anon
thanks for sharing that completely made up story. good read!
Great story!!!!
Well done ;-)
5*
Has great potential. (I like submissive, dominated cuck tales. Hope this progresses that way.)
Great Story but Poorly Written
I really enjoyed the story but the it was very difficult to read with missed words, wrong words, missing punctuation and bad grammar. Proofing your story is more than just running spell check. You need to completely read the story to yourself, reading it out loud helps too. You could also ask one of the many editors here on Lit to help.
Thank you for writing and posting here. Please keep contributing and let me know if you do a rewrite of this. I would love to read it.
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