All Comments on 'Mom Named Barbie Ch. 02'

More please !

Jay is a bright kid. It won't be long before he figures out his mom's got a warm wet pussy between her thighs that needs her boy's attention.

Looks like I'm the only one who appreciates your story. I understand the buildup and pain both are experiencing. I also know what will happen to them. I did choose the "Incest/Taboo" Field your story is in. Thankyou for your demonstration of story building. I look forward to what is to be.

The Author did say it is his 1st attempt. So criticisms could be positive as well as negative.

This story may or may not be everyone's cup of tea. 1 thing tho is there have been negative comments. Thats their right. But just as they ask no one compliment the author for trying they dont have to keep reading. IF you hated part 1 NO ONE is forcing you to read part 2 and on.

Some parts are more believable than others but I am curious now how the author will take us to the conclusion The Incest Category implies

I like it, refreshing