All Comments on 'Klutz and the Sympathetic'

Please write more, whether it's a sequel to this story or a new one. I enjoyed reading your stories a lot, thanks for writing.

Agreed please write more! You have a great talent for writing! Thank you for sharing it!

Sweet story. A sequel would be nice. Pretty please?

Thanks for the comment!! I plan on writing more on here, don't worry. I haven't thought about a sequal for this one, however, but there's definitely more I can develop with this story.

Thanks for the support! Please look forward to more from me!

This was written as a one shot type of story, but if I get more requests to write a sequal, I definitely will!

please write another ch to this, I though this was very good story, but not sure anyone can be that much of a klutz, but it was a good twist to the story anyway

It works as a one-shot as is, but I'd love a sequel, prequel, whatever... I mention prequel just because I think hearing more about Tat's previous misadventures and just in general more background on the characters would be nice. In other words, i like the novelette best, but enjoy the short story.

A lovely story! I hope that you'll continue this! Thank you!

hi i loved the story and would definitely want to hear more about them together :) hopefully you not go off kilter and make them party girls or something .. i like the love between them it irritates me when writers suddenly change the style of the story ..

I'll see to that sequal then given the large amount of requests. Thanks for the comment!

I've realized this was a very straightforward story with little knowledge about the characters. I plan on developing them some more as I go into another chapter, though. Please look forward to it.

...but the "writing" makes it very nearly unreadable!

Incredibly over-written at the start, appalling dialogue, spelling and grammatical errors galore... etc.

PLEASE, get some help with your writing before you submit again.

Be quiet. I understand criticism, but you are being an asshole. All you had to say was you didn't like it the author's style of writing. You took it way too far for no reason.

I loved the story by the way. Sorry, forgot to mention that. :)

I thought you captured the early moments of attraction and love very well. I enjoyed this piece very much. It reminded me of that crazy jumble of feelings I had when I first started falling for my best friend. Thank you very much for sharing your stories.

Nice read, actually enjoyed it and will look out for a follow-up. Cute I would say. The characters will grow and develop as will the author. Thank you for your time in writing this.

A really lovely story, great build up and ending. Perhaps too many "smirks" etc. Have a look at the use of English to improve. (I gave it 4stars)

I ain't gonna lie I came here to have a quick sexual fantasy to jack off but reading this story was a pleasant surprise. A beautiful love story between two girls that conveyed that awkward friendly tension to this romance. Came for the sex stories stayed for the story

Aw this was such a sweet story. I loved it.

Being a bit of a klutz myself i could relate to this sweet tale

Please write more

I enjoyed the setting, the outfit descriptions and the endearing personalities of the characters. I found it more entertaining than erotic but a good read nonetheless.

What a sweet loving story, i really enjoyed it. Thankyou!

Every time I've read this story (which is loads) I laugh until i have tears in my eyes and always finish reading with the biggest smile. Short, funny as hell and romantic. What more is needed for a good story?

This is sooooooo sweet so innocent so cute so lovely ....... My goodness all this clumsiness all this selfless being , this story is so extraordinary marvelous ....... Ten stars are not enough

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A nice story!

I love the different style, made me smile!

Thank you!