This is the second story of yours I've read and again, you are so close. I still find your male leads to be too selfish and your females shortchamging themselves. Orgasm denial is a great kink, when reasonable. Arousal doesn't last forever. It is fulfilled or fades away. I'm sad when a story makes me feel to hell with it all. Also, power play is what it is, but when a D screws up and the s finally reacts D gets away with 'my bad' and s gets punished?
I've watched the scores on this and my other fetish story and have wondered what I could improve, so your comment is much appreciated. Send me an email, I'd love to brainstorm with someone who has an opinion on this type of storyline.
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Oh yes Daddy, I am just as wet reading this.
This is the second story of yours I've read and again, you are so close. I still find your male leads to be too selfish and your females shortchamging themselves. Orgasm denial is a great kink, when reasonable. Arousal doesn't last forever. It is fulfilled or fades away. I'm sad when a story makes me feel to hell with it all. Also, power play is what it is, but when a D screws up and the s finally reacts D gets away with 'my bad' and s gets punished?
Thank you for the constructive criticism
I've watched the scores on this and my other fetish story and have wondered what I could improve, so your comment is much appreciated. Send me an email, I'd love to brainstorm with someone who has an opinion on this type of storyline.
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Such a great story! I can't wait to read more!!
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