All Comments on 'Casual Conversation - Doctor's Order'

PUNCTUATION!!!!!!! The are NO quotation marks anywhere, if this is a CONVERSATION they should be everywhere speech is, there's none. Why is this even in romance?

The text is such a messy here

This is the first chain story I've read, but it would read a lot easier if you used quotation marks properly, or if you just used them at all. I say this because in my own writing for this site, what few readers I have seem to appreciate good grammar. Keep writing and good luck.