All Comments on 'Mr. Basketball Ch. 14'

This is out of left field. Captain America is a Nazi. Bobby Ewing getting shot was a dream. Teagan is alive. Seriously, wtf?

This suggests that you wrote this story as you went along and discovered that you had painted yourself into a corner. Next time go further in your writing and consider the way you are going before you publish. not rated

This was a wonderful series and It's good to see you working on it again. Thank you.

It seems like you really took your time on this chapter, so instead of coming off as a rushed attempt to back out of a story choice, it seems like it was planned all along. So happy to see Teagan still alive, if this was meant to to be a closing chapter though I would've loved to have seen them go to the specialist only to find that it's no longer needed.

Great to have you back, honestly I'd love to see you give final closure to this story and then start up another great romance! Keep up the fantastic work!

Welcome back and thanks for continuing this well written series. This is a treat, intriguing turn in plot. Way to go

Loved the return of Teagan and you are a good writer.

However, would also love some incest added into the story as that is what first drew me to this story series and some group sex involving Teagan and Jake would be enjoyable too, maybe with Taylor or Sam being the third member of the threesome. I love the concept of a "Loving Family" or "Family with Benefits" even though some readers who are more into the romance between two people, might not be as comfortable with that sort of concept.

Anyway good to have you back.

Ah....it was a good story series.

BTW, your patients wouldn't be so thin if you feed them more frequently. :)

ive loved this series since i first read it, i hope there is more to come.

So the last 5 chapters have just been a 'dream'. No!! This is clearly not planned - you don't waste a whole 5 chapters getting us to invest in Taylor, only to bring Teagan back from the dead. The first switcheroo was bad enough. Anyway - no one ever has a dream so detailed that it takes 20 or so Literotica pages to write. For me, you just kicked all the fun out of what was, till now, a great story.

Shame you wasted a couple of chapters on a dream sequence. Why did you bother if you intended to revoke the direction you were going in. It was going okay till now.

It must be ... dusty in here. My eyes have tears in them BUT I know I can’t be crying! ;( Outstanding story. I even learned a little bit more about basketball.

Thank you for SHARING these stories we the rest of us! THANK YOU!

- pal

The nurse said he was in an accident a few days ago and in a coma for a week. A few or couple days is less than a week. Was he driving while in a coma?

This chapter just ruined a great storyline. What a waste to see a wonderfully written story fail with a long unwanted dream.

So...which is the dream? The one where Teagan dies and he gets together with Taylor? Or this one here where Teagan doesn't die and Taylor never happened? Calling it....Mind fuck.