Well developed story line, less the wham, bam, thank you ma'am, and more the struggle to find solace in a world filed with mistrust and negativity. Nice work, I'm looking forward to future chapters.
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Well developed story line, less the wham, bam, thank you ma'am, and more the struggle to find solace in a world filed with mistrust and negativity. Nice work, I'm looking forward to future chapters.
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