helene has the power to knock your socks off. BAS-icaly a wonderful story
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Anonymous05/28/04
*smiles, picks up a fan*
Helene,
Good read, keep up the writing, your fans await more...
Cardea
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08/22/04
Burglarize me...
Wow. Simple yet well thought out storyline. Very vivid in detail and incredibly arousing. The ending was great. I'll have to remember the marbel trick.
Thanks for the tips sweets,and you were worried about a post in Abs? You naughty girl, taunting us like that and then giving us this bit of brilliance.
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Anonymous08/31/04
Wonderful!!
More!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Anonymous09/13/04
Kick butt story!!!!!!!!!!!
Where can I find a mr. right that way. hahaha Great writing!!! Awesome storyline!!!! I need more!!!!
English
AWESOME
I loved it!!!
Please Continue with Your Great Work...
Love to read them..
Tammie/kohana
Way to go!
Wonderful!
Vitto
Hot Hot Hot
Helene knows how to fire things up!
Jalapeno Candy
not your everyday spam
helene has the power to knock your socks off. BAS-icaly a wonderful story
*smiles, picks up a fan*
Helene,
Good read, keep up the writing, your fans await more...
Cardea
Burglarize me...
Wow. Simple yet well thought out storyline. Very vivid in detail and incredibly arousing. The ending was great. I'll have to remember the marbel trick.
Hmmmm.
Thanks for the tips sweets,and you were worried about a post in Abs? You naughty girl, taunting us like that and then giving us this bit of brilliance.
Wonderful!!
More!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Kick butt story!!!!!!!!!!!
Where can I find a mr. right that way. hahaha Great writing!!! Awesome storyline!!!! I need more!!!!
where is the ending to this story
this was great cant wait for more
Go Baby Go....
Eagerly awaiting
WOW!!!
This definately compromised my position! Write more Helene, write more! Gave this one a much deserved 5.
Great!
Can't wait to read the sequel. Very arousing story!
Great story
Great story, very well written. Please write and post more.
Cat
Tease!
Very well written....please continue!
Wicked,
wicked tease! Tantalizingly lewd and licentious - I'm hoping you're working on the next chapter! Thanks, LJ.
The Stare
There's very little as powerful as that of a well imagined stare to set one's mind on fire in a way that one's body simply cannot ignore.
Great story, helene, though I was sad to see the torment end.
~lucky
very cool story!
I love it and hope you write more!
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