Leaning about My Step Sis

Maddeningly

Short

Quite short

As someone's already pointed out, this story is maddeningly short, but I gave it 5 stars because I see a potential for a good series.

Leaning about? You couldn't even bother to spell the title correctly.... unless I'm missing something here.

Keep going

It's starting out good. Let's see where you take us.

Good Start

Nice! Lots of potential with this story line. A bit short, but, gives you opportunity to bring us more.

very hot please continue

I loved your story and very much want to see it continue.. I would be very happy in his place with those lovely and loving girls.. there is enough love to share with two othets not just one.. the whole one on one seems too restrictive and short changing for both.. there is no place for being jealous since love isn't just a fixed amount but is endless to share.. ignore the petty comments about form over substance.. fuck spelling it is about the message... please continue.. anyone please feel free to contact me...

I loved the story!

You missed getting five stars because of the typo in the TITLE ;( ! Please make sure to read your work through properly before submitting it to avoid such crass errors!

Apart from that, well done -- please write (and spell-check) more!

Good start on a great story

5 stars for the story, 4 stars on technical. More would help, like an other pair of eyes see what you missed!

That was hot.

Great start hope you are doing more with this . Thanks for the story keep writing and I'll keep reading.

step sis....

WOW....good story, i want more of this one...please
5 STARS

If he doesn't screw Val real hard and then Mindy; he's a damn fool :) Two hot women who want him and they all want each other. Maybe, Kevin should first screw Val slow and make out big time and then do Mindy. After that, all 3 should make out as a group and then he can screw each one the same length of time and then cum on both of them to be fair ?? Great story - yes we want more please, right away. Thank you.

Sexy brother Kevin

Kevin needs a bit of chest hair for that muscular frame!

Nice beginning...

But the sex -- when it happens -- happens too fast for my taste. There could/should have been more buildup, more foreplay, more explicit teasing by Mindy as her body was exposed and fondled initially.
And when Val got involved, even though she's been horny for him for a long time, there could/should have been some reluctance that had to be overcome before she was sucking away.
I gave it 4 stars.

Fine Start

Thanks! We look forward to more!

Good story, but...

The story is good, but I don't understand by all the girls need to be "bi".
Sorry, but I prefer the stories with a little romance, not only explicit sex.
Maybe is because I'm not able to sharing my love (I'm a man of only one woman).
Anyway. I give you 5* for this story.
I hope the next chapter is more romantic.
I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

Nice.

I would like to read more of this.

More please. Perhaps a longer chapter next time.

Good story

Hope you will add more chapters. My favorite was the story about your cousin. It has been a year. I will you would add to that story.

Great story

Good start keep them chapters coming

More

Good story, would love to read more

Great start.

More please !

But don't leave it too long though - will you !

Well you wrote this back in the fall, it's Jan, 14th. Please continue.