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by Anonymous

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by peebudy10/01/16

happy Birthday indeed

great story

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by Anonymous10/01/16

WOW

That is the ultimate birthday gift... Lucky lucky guy

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by Anonymous10/02/16

a very good, well-written story

But I have to confess to a bit of disappointment. Although a father fucking his baby girl is fine, the title led me to expect a story along different lines, i.e., according to the old saying, "a mother's twat is her son's playground," sometimes followed by "and the boy really enjoys making great big puddles in his personal playground."

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by bucco4010/02/16

Follow Up

A little predictable on the ending but good. A follow up chapter at home would be great.

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by Anonymous10/02/16

follow up with more please.

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by Slut4daddie36D10/02/16

Fuck me Daddy!

Excellent, got my pussy very wet! Please continue.

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by Anonymous10/05/16

Absolutely wonderful

So fucking sucking hot, more and more of this please and soon, such as the orgy at home after the club, I adore cunt never get enough. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc's U.K.

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