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to short!
the last to chapters could barely make one. It seems to signify that u r losing interest in telling this warn, So why should we continue with interest/
Getting lost
I really hate to agree with an anon, but the last few short short chapters don't have a strong linear connection with each other. Its not that they are too short, they're just so disparate from each other, its a bit confusing.
Take a breath. Take your time. Submit a completed thought that flows from the last. Doesn't really matter if its short or long, just have the weird breaks happen in the same chapter.
Weird breaks
It was in longer chunks, but every time I tried to submit it they wanted it broken up more. The entire thing is finished, has been for a long time. It has 21 chapters like it is, I will try to make the chapters longer. It has been submitted up till chapter 10. Thanks for the advice. Keep reading.
oh fuck i am coming
oh god raven is so hot! make him cum more often
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