Waking Nightmares Ch. 02

beautiful

a great story on a taboo subject.... 5 stars

Keep it up

I loved this just as much as I loved the first one, it speaks from and to the heart. The slow but purposeful approach is paying off in both Allison finally making progress and the story gaining momentum. Him opening up to her and allowing her to come to conclusion that he's speaking fro experience was the best part, establishing trust was the single most important turning point of this chapter.

I was wondering about Hailey and her part - I have a nagging feeling that she somewhat responsible (or at least feels that way) for Allisons condition and has even greater trust issues. Guess the future parts will tell the whole story about her.

Again 5* and keeping expectations high :)

Hooray!

At last! Here is a story about relationships that make you think. I am an avid and obsessive reader, well . . . I am on this site slumming *chuckles. There are only a handful of decent writers on Lit that engage me. Keep going, you may well join them. Excellent so far.

Yep great stuff

Hope you can find time to write more often. I had to re-read Chapter 1 since it had been almost two months.

I can only echo what the other folks have said. This is not a light hearted fantasy, but it does "speak" to me.

Thanks!

progress

and hope
are good indicators.
I'll watch for Ch. 03

Great stuff. Don't stop

Not much more to say. Thank you.

Thank you

for continuing this story! I was afraid you may have dropped it. I've read a lot of stories on this site, some great, many not so great, but this one's the one that's finally gotten me to create an account so I can give it some deserving praise. The characters are enthralling; the story holds much promise. I look forward to reading the rest of it and anything else you write.

Next chapter

I hope U don't miss the next chapter amongst the flotsam....

Great Story!

Unusual subject matter, but that's part of what makes it stand out from the crowd. I hope to see a new update soon, because the story has lots of promise!

Fortunately, I started with the first chapter. Very neat story line that is easy to assimilate having once had the malady. Thank you for the gentle handling of a very touchy reality for some. Truly enjoyed and graded with two 5's. Thank you very much.

jntiques

Good Story****

Great piece of writing about an important subject. Thank for sharing

has promise

Interesting subject matter, and very good characters. Obviously a labour of love for you I feel. I just hope its not dragged out for too long, as several chapters going over the same thing could get tiresome. But had me hooked so far.

P.s please don't forget your other story

Very well written.

But the site is called literotica, the clue is in the name.
There may be a plan to turn this into a romantic story but so far it has been 2 chapters of utter misery.
If i read this on another story site then I would give it top marks but here the first 2 chapters get a 3* rating from me.

Sometimes, the best things in life are worth waiting for...as the old adage goes!

Like the tenor of your story...the way you are handling the complexities of the human psyche. I look forward to reading on as they get closer...and see what you do with her sister.

Great story buttttt

I love the story and the idea of it. Sometimes, I felt like it got cheesy or awkward. I would try to work on those parts. However, I liked the second half of this story more than anything. Great job! Upload more!!

Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Great, so far

Developing into a great little tale but PLEASE don't tempt FTDS by keeping us all waiting for the rest of it.

What now I've two stories to look forward to...

Well you have drawn me in I'm looking forward to more of both your stories....