by oggbashan
this one just seemed a few paragraphs short. As if there were a few loose ends not tied up.
I am surprised by the category. I hope people find and read this entertaining story.
Not so much funny but a great read in any category.
Five Stars
Awesome way to train someone. But instead of a code word to kill, use the code word to train then use hypnotic suggestion, in order to get person to respond to the violence by defending themselves and their spouse! Great story, loved it!
And to maybe also for him to grow a pair of balls. Little bitch wont even spar with me... Let alone be aggressive in bed....
Love the story. I once had a conversation with a former policeman. One night he was called to the scene of an attack on an elderly man. What he found was a diminutive Asian man. Three young men had decided to attack him, however, in three moves, he used his stick and his skills to kill one and incapacitate the other two!
I am amazed at your creativity, pleasantly so, especially with your ability to completely change the subject matter, from story to story.
Again, Great Read !
THANKS !