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Everyone loves an old dog but you can't teach him any new tricks!
Short, sharp and to the point I enjoyed this doggy story!
Not really an affair!
An affair is usually between one or both people married to someone else. In this case, it was just lust, and no age descriptions. Not bad, but always stimulating.
Awkward!
It had a slow, overly-described start, then almost raced to the next slow, incomplete thought that had me trying to decide whether to continue reading or abandon.
You had the finish in your mind, but with little idea of how to get there.
As I said, Awkward!
I gave you a 4* because it was better than a 3*.
OLD?
40's?? Old??
Dang.
I am 73 and everything works just fine, plus.. I KNOW some stuff.
*LOL**
I liked it.
Interesting story and I hope Joy becomes a champion!
Good Concept
I liked the story line. A lot of stereotyping but not bad for a first effort. A writing class would improve the flow.
A LOT in a short space!
You pulled it off! So much in such a short space is usually unsatisfying.
Congrats!
Short -
Short - fast & to the point for sure.! I hope this is not the end of this one but I do wonder.........
Only time will tell.
"4" ~~ Thank you.
Amazing
How great looking younger women seem to hook up not with some younger man to build a life with, but go for the gold with someone rich and powerful and, of course nice. That is always so important, as if there are no nice younger guys.
Hey, when you get ready for kids you can always sucker some younger nice guy into marriage, where you can get the kids you will love with the one you pretend to love-for a while, anyway.
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