No Easy Way Out

BS!

Give me a break! In less than 10 minutes she throws away all her marriage vows........becomes a slut....and all it takes is a shower and a fuck for him to forgive her.
The story wasn't bad until the end. It was believable til then.

I agree

not a bad story till he took her back so easily.
You have to be a little bit realistic - as you were until the shower.
Otherwise well written.

cool

great story!

Boring

Erotic? I don't think so.

Not believable

He should have thrown her out before he beat the shit out of Walton. It only took ten minutes for her to betray his love, now thats a real loving wife. Lets face it, she is a cheating slut and he is a forgiving wimp.

believeable IF

I found the story believeable unlike others, because sometimes a man gets so pissed off at being hurt and betrayed by a woman that "taking her" is the only healing he is driven to do. It doesn't have a thing to do with forgiving a slut. He might in a week go find a cute 20 year old and toss the old bag out. Men have alot of options. The story could have been written a little better though.

Better than most

I truly enjoyed this one. Compared to a number of other stories I've read here, it's obvious that it wasn't typed with one hand. Most submissions are so horribly written that they have me cringing in a corner, clutching my Harvard English handbook like a small child with a security blanket. The flow needs work, but I like your style. Great work!

Been there

I went threw something like this. Only the bitch wouldn't reveal the name of the guy. He needed to go into more detail about the feeling of the rage flowing threw him. The story ended too abruptly. Sex is only the start of the healing he tried to portray. Trust and respect have to be added to the mix. otherwise a good story. Love betrayed is difficult to recapture. NOt too mention was he faithfull to her.
Raven

A real slut

10 minutes is all it took? How long before the next 10 minutes and the 10 after that?
Would he trust her? How? Only with a chastity belt.

forgiveness!

I know many will not see the underlying issues of your story, and will probably find fault, he took her back to quick, or did not throw her out. I look at your story as of a couple with years of life experience between them. This bond of love and togetherness is not something thrown out like a dead fish in a newspaper. Yes she was stupid, aren't we all at some time. The best thing was letting Walton know there was a price to be paid, and she saw part of the result. Helped Billy to come to grips with his rage, she couldn't of cheated with out a partner who ignored her rings and trespassed on Billys territory. Thank you:

WHY BEAT THE MAN OR MEN

HE STILL LIVE WITH THE WHORESLUT WHO FUCK ANOTHER.WHY BEAT THE MALE AND HE DIDN'T RAPE HER.AND HE DIDN'T LEAVE HER.

Words...

I rather liked the way TP used single words to begin a sentence and/or paragraph. He used "color words" several times. And then a "famous" beginning":

Distance. Space. Two words so similar, but yet so different.

It made the writing interesting at least. I wish he had done more "character development" so that we might have had a little more insight to the husband/wife relationship.
I'll continue to look for more writings from TP.

Too Simple

I can understand the husband's rage. What I can't understand is the quick jump to sex with his wife. She had sex, probably unprotected with someone else. The danger of disease, not to mention the destruction of his respect and trust in her should have prevented him from touching her, let alone having sex with her. The big question is will he ever be able to forgive her, and get over this? Even with counselling there is no guarantee that the marriage will survive. At the very least I'd insist on both of them having STD tests 1/month for the next 6 months, and a lie detector test before any swap of bodily fluids. Counselling would be a good idea, but also seperate beds - if not one person moving out. For those reasons I think your answer was too simple and quick.

Reply from Author

I have never felt the need or desire to post a public opinion on one of my own stories, but feel I need to with this one.
I have appreciated the constructive criticsm and have even been amused by the rest. The inspiration for this story came about when I was talking with a group of co-workers. Everyone was tossing out their two cents as to what they would do if their spouse cheated on them.
I do realize that not everyone would or has handled the situation in the same way as the character of this story has. What would have been accomplished by Billy beating up his wife? In fact, nothing was accomplished by his confrontation with his boss.
Billy acted on his emotions and instincts. It is that simple. If you were in his place, and your instinct was to rape or beat your wife, then that is your choice. The story did not finish with a 'and they lived happily ever after'. It is up to the reader's imagination as to what comes next.
The sex at the end of the story can be seen in many different ways. He did still love his wife, and she loved him. The world, sexuality and relationships are not in black and white. There are no simple answers.
I've never been in the situation the main character found himself in. I don't know exactly how I would react. Maybe some of the critics with such strong remarks have been in this situation. If you have, then I'm sorry. BUT, I believe that the people who discribe the wife as slut, whore and whatever need to realize that these are not two people that hate each other, but love each other. Did she do something wrong? Yes. Sometimes, for whatever weakness or reason we hurt the ones we love. One should never be a doormat, but you must be able to forgive. He took a step at the end of the story. BIG step for some, not so big for others. It all depends on the person.

Twistedplayr

The problem?

I have never seen a man, any man, pick up a slut in a bar, who is half sluiced, and fuck her in 10 minutes.
I can't think of any known "easy" women that would fuck a stranger in 10 minutes.
There's gotta be something wrong with this woman.
Any woman allowing her panties to be removed, within 10 minutes, by a stranger, has to be a slut or messed up in the mind.

Cute comments from the author notwithstanding...

about acting on "instinct". Instinct gets you killed. Like if I walk in and see a guy porking my wife. My "instinct" says to put a bullet through his crotch. See what I mean? I sure hope that the guy used a condom the size and thickness of a Dunlop tire! You gave no reason as to why this woman was so easy. In this day and age, acting on "instinct" gets you dead or in hospital. Yeah, it not as sexy or as raw as if he just whips it out , bends her over a stool and goes for it, but , at least the hero of the piece is alive and disease free long enough to fuck again! You can write a very good , erotic scene where she puts it on him. Had to take way a point for that.

Basic story is good.

It is the details that are not plausible. For example, no woman unless she is mentally ill can meet a stranger and be fucked in ten minutes. Maybe in one or two hours.

Enjoyed

I see in the comments that people can not see quick submission by Janice to her lover and quick lovemaking by Billy with her. I could see both: Janice not thinking and just reacting to hormones, and Billy giving in as a way to restore his life and "manhood" with his wife. I do not think his quick action would mean less pain in their relationship for sometime. I enjoyed your writing and please keep it up.

Thoroughly enjoyed it!

I must agree with enovolist. The single word and short simple sentences are very dramatic. Excellent!

Best Regards

Robert

Some good, some okay

The writing shows promise, I'd suggest you hook up with one of the volunteer editors... and listen to them!

The story seems more like an oral story rather than one that's been printed and edited a couple of times.
I do agree that it is easy to say a person would do this or that under different circumstances, but real life is a little messier! Cowards become heros and heros become cowards!


The basic story is interesting and could be pretty good with a rewrite and an editor. I'd suggest trying several different endings and seeing what you are comfortable with!

Contrary to what you read here, reconciliation is neither good nor bad! It does happen sometimes... and a lot of time it doesn't!

As for the quickness of her coupling? Who knows? I'd be somewhat amazed, but hell, I'm amazed every time my wife watches Dr. Phil!
Sure, people are generally consistent, but surprises happen.

no quarter

Your hero in this story is a fool! After whipping the shit out of the boss, he should have finished the bastard. As for the wife, if I would have kept her, I would have kicked her so hard in the ass, that she would have to unbutton her collar to shit! Texas Tornado

Good storytelling

Pretty good prose but an editor would make it even better. The character descriptions are modest, and I have to agree with the other posters who said they had a tough time believing the wife's character. For her to have intercourse with a complete stranger ten minutes after they meet is a nice fantasy but that's all it is, a fantasy.

Once the story crosses over into the realm of the fantastic, anything's possible. The cocks are all a foot long, there are never any performance issues, seventy year old men can get hard five times a day, STDs aren't a problem, nobody ever gets pregnant, and the women all have multiple orgasms just thinking about having sex. I suppose it's fun but it doesn't particularly float my boat.

I appreciated the portrayal of the husband's rage though I had some difficulty understanding the quick rapprochement with his wife. Clearly he got some closure from assaulting his boss but how did he get closure for his wife's infidelity? He didn't, and without closure, how can there be forgiveness? Without forgiveness, how can love survive?

Enjoyed the story though I don't agree with some of the ideas expressed here. Thank you for your effort.

Wonderful Story

What an intense story. The emotion begins at the first scene and does not let up. I am a sucker for a happy ending but it sure doesn't get there in a sissy fashion. Good work.

Strong Writing

Although the story has problems with the speed of the seduction and the haste of the reconciliation there are no problems with how the author expresses the husbands rage when his wife's infidelity is revealed. Very good writing. It's too bad that this author has seemed to have disappeared from the Literotica stage.

WOW!!!

If literary excellence met prono screen play... it wouldn't hold a torch to this story.... best I have read and not "graphic"... if you know what I mean!!!!!!!!!!

What man in his right mind would fuck a woman

that had just fucked a sexual stranger and had not been tested for a whole menu of sexual and nonsexual diseases, STDs, and AIDS. Granted it would take a week or so for the infections to begin to show in test, and some test would need to be taken for at least a year before actually being considered clean. But a man willing to walk up to talk to then fuck a woman will have a history of random fucks. Random fucks means at real risk of STDs and AIDS. And what woman who actually has some self esteem and love for her husband actually would fuck a man in his office while waiting on the husband. And even worse when asked why not really know why but it was hot! Could you actually ever trust such a woman in the future who has so little control over herself? You might love her, but she really doesnt love or respect you or herself, and it is best to divorce her now rather than wind up with diseases she brings home in the future. You just pushed a reconciliation at any cost story down some folks throats. There is nothing to forgive here, and no possibility for a future.

This is Poor with a capital P

the husband is mentally ill is my best guess

Hmmm

I don't know...it's fantasy, but I keep seeing the absence of PRIDE. PRIDE would keep a man from fucking a faithless cheating whore. PRIDE would keep a man from laying himself open to whatever disease the aforementioned whore brought home. We won't even bring up self respect, dignity, honor, loyalty and so forth...the story completely lacks any mention of simple, old fashioned, and highly important PRIDE. Whether by design, or because the author has no familiarity with the word, I do not know, but said absence ruins the premise.

Ah

Yet another story where the marraige actually gets better because the wife cheated. I'm amazed it isn't on talk shows, amazed it isn't in best sellers and on the front pages of tabloid magazines. Maybe marraige counsellors can work it into their speeches as well....if your relationship is in trouble, go get some strange and all will be well..or better! Of course, I'd like to see the author or someone else actually try that shit in real life and see how far it gets you.

Nah!

Masochistic relationship! The word she forgot was NO! Oh, dear, he was delayed. Well that certainly is an excuse to cheat. Nobody would think that was an implausible excuse. Of course, just go do it. It was not her fault; it was his. She would never do it again because they had hot, re-uniting sex in the shower. Yah, sure. Intereste in buy the Golden Gate Bridge. I can sell it cheap.

Half a story.

Very weak no build no reason to even read it. The sex was boring. What a waste.

Too easy

The problem with the cheating and the forgiveness is that both are too easy. The marriage relationship is probably the most important one, by far, that a person can have. That a faithful wife could simply throw that away so quickly is staggering. When confronted she has no good reason. Impulsive behavior? People get a kinds of impulsive thoughts for much less important things and we restrain ourselves. We don't steal money, we don't hit people. etc. There is no indication she is excessively impulsive in other areas but for THIS we are to believe she is. Impulse is not an answer. And her simple impulsive act rends asunder their marriage. How much can she love him to throw it away so easily? Will it happen again? Did it start a slow corrosion of her love for him? Can she ever be trusted? Can he love a woman who acts this way? He has a knife in his heart. Can it be removed? Will it heal? Suppose it only heals half way; can the relationship work anymore? And then a screw in the shower fixes it all? Again, this trivializes the value of the act. If a screwing buys forgiveness how much is forgiveness worth. Not much. The transgression was major and required a major effort for forgiveness. The whole thing was reduced to the severity of her scraping a fender on the car. It's over in a fucking minute.

Believable and well written....

....it has happened just like this before and the author paced it appropriately, so the correct questions come to mind.No answers needed when two people have deep history, necessarily that is.

Story good...

added feedback from the author even better. Why do people who can't construct a simple sentence or spell short words send their illiterate, and always abusive, feedback?

robinhood!

Your comment was interesting in that it shortchanged others right to their own opinions. This site has these comment areas to give these opinions to the authors who risk getting harangment and without any doubt some fairly harsh comments. I do not agree with all comments I've seen on here but I do believe we have a right to our opinions, right or wrong. I did not like this particular story but it was well written. R.T.

forgive, but

some revenge of equal experience...she cheated how mant times, and that number he has...something! There was lust and free will, so why not just ...go...let her go....

Women excel at sneaky sex.

Even if she somehow might fuck a stranger in only 10 minutes, she would not tell her husband. And, assaulting the man. How stupid can that be. There must be 50 million men in the USA alone that would fuck a pretty wife given the opportunity. Assaulting one, doesn't change a thing. If the wife is going to get fucked by some guy, assaulting one of fifty million doesn't change a thing.

Hogwash!

Sympathy fuck is suppose to sooth a cheated husband? What a stupid premise.

Yikes,

who needs enemies with a loving wife like her?

OK that they got back together, however ...

despite the author's comment that the story didn't end with them "living happily ever after" his words sure made us feel that way. They "became each others only one". That glosses over all the damage that she did. She is at work and is "overcome with lust" and fucks a guy. Wow! Is this going to happen again? Her lust is dead? Under control? Her lust caused her to lose her mind, to forget about her marriage and her husband, and her own morals and self respect? That sounds like a serious mental problem. Usually someone has to get drunk or high before they get that stupid. What's going on in her head? Is it fixable?

And she is back with her husband without paying any real price for her moment of insanity. Most people that do something wrong and get away with it believe that they can do it again and get away with it. What's to stop her? She ended up telling on herself. Maybe next time she won't feel so guilty and just let sleeping dogs lie. Then she can do it over and over.

You tacked a lovely "happily ever after" romantic ending onto a story with a nasty problem and walked away like everything was great now. The fuck fairy magically fixed everything. Sure they can get back together because her indiscretion was a single mindless and meaningless fuck. You can get over that. But it's not this easy. They did nothing to earn their reconciliation and therefore it feels cheap and unreal. He doesn't have to beat her up. How about telling her to leave for a couple weeks? How about counseling? Maybe she has to quit her job? What has she learned? How will she control her lust in the future? How has she earned his forgiveness and trust?

I liked the writing style, it was unusual. The overall story was fairly common but that's OK. I needed more.

HE BEAT ON THE WRONG PERSON

and now she is in control.. TK U MLJ LV NV

and another impulse will strike her and he's supposed to give her all, and she ...doesn't quite give him all? better to leave her to them and him go on, having learned a mightly lesson and hopefully a lot better waits for him

just another pussy ass author with a cuckold fetish

the husband is an asshole that did the right thing till he took the slut back

Actually this is very realistic and....

...he beat the usurper with his fists and she's doing a job on herself and will continue to so it's all good. She reacted in such a way that their marriage MIGHT actually survive and be stronger. This story does not need drawn out retributions.

A pussy-wimp and an idfiot

They "became each other's only one"? Does this mean they weren't before? If so, he had no business being angry about her fucking another man. If they were, then what makes him think she will be his "only one" this time around? The heart wants what the heart wants, but for fucks sake, the balls should have some input.

The commenter before me is an idfiot,

Pistolpackinpete nailed it.

the last comment and PPpete are fucking morons

so the husband ends up with sloppy seconds from a slut and this will make a stronger marriage, I guess the 35% of marriages that end due to cheating. should have stayed and asked their slut to cheat again.

Wonderfully written snapshot.

Captured real emotions. I don't buy the quick and abrupt reconciliation. I cannot imagine it working that way, that quickly. But, it was this author's vision of reconciliation, and it was very well done.

No Good

Just like that! He forgives and forgets? I don't think so. Someone made a comment about real emotions? Not in this fucking world. Maybe in an alternate universe. Here she saw a man while waiting for her husband and went to office and fucked him in ten minutes time. She's not worth keeping.

In a ch. 2 the husband would come to his senses and divorce the cheating slut.

FUCK

Yuck!

What the fuck? He is either married to a slut or a nut or both! Get the fuck away from her, she isn't worth going to jail for! Cut your losses and runs. There was no mention of kids so there should be no mention of forgiveness or staying married. Yuck!