Formulaic plot with no originality. Little if any character development. WHY ARE YOU USING CAPITAL LETTERS?
Poorly written piece of garbage.
Loved your story would love to see more of them
Could have used more build up just rushing into it feels to unbelievable.
It is a wonderful thing when siblings get together. It can be very beneficial for both.
Don't listen to these assholes, nice job.
More please
This is so hot!
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Formulaic plot with no originality. Little if any character development.
WHY ARE YOU USING CAPITAL LETTERS?
Poorly written piece of garbage.
its love hate lust
Loved your story would love to see more of them
To short
Could have used more build up just rushing into it feels to unbelievable.
Nice short story
It is a wonderful thing when siblings get together. It can be very beneficial for both.
Good job
Don't listen to these assholes, nice job.
good job
More please
This is so hot!
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