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Balfie Is Dead

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by Anonymous

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by Tathagata05/16/04

This

is poetry.

Tragic, open, raw,truth.
stunning work
I am speechless
Thank you

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by 05/16/04

I agree

This is poetry. A tragic piece, with emotions laid well in the lines... a wonderful piece.

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by LeBroz01/13/07

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Balfie sounds like a wreck of a man.

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by duddle14602/04/07

Rich imagery

This poem has an undertone of sadness, the imagery here is lovely.

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by tazz31705/10/12

GONE GONE GONE

changing nothing, TK U MLJ LV NV

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