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by JCSTREET

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tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
Excellent!

Mature efficiency of language here, as in this poet's other works. Well done.

TathagataTathagataalmost 20 years ago
"skittered across Utah like drops on a skillet,"

Brilliant.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Great lines

I especially like the one that Tathagata quoted?amazing and rich!

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Sounds like the move East was not a move of joy.

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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Sounds like the move East was not a move of joy.

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