All Comments on 'Oh Hell!'

Please more asap!!

Luci is one of them. I need that book.

Great story.

Unlike similar characters I found here, Luci is not truly evil, I think

It is just her perspective of what is good or bad is different from humans.

I feel she just wanted him to come with her.

Or she just pretentend like that?

Anyway, thank you for the story.

Incredibly funny! Very enjoyable read...

Great story, funny and sexy. Would love to know if they are happy in hell.

Really funny story. Great terms too "Jizrag" ? Never heard that one before. Very well written, held interest and a great twist at the end. She took him along after all.

Ended weird not sure if I like it

There had better be a sequel to this cause I want more of these characters. This is the best love story Ive read in a long time and I want to know what happens in the undervworld. So get typing! You have work to do. ;-)

definitely needs a sequel !

Great start. You know this has to continue after creating such a wonderful base.

I love your writing style and character development. One minor constructive criticism is that you rushed the ending. Also, it was little darker than I would have preferred and seemed a bit out of keeping with the demon's growing affection for our hero. . . His death could have been in a sequel ;-)

Thank you again for a great story and I too am looking forward to the next chapter :-)

That ending kinda just came out. There was no real buildup and the plot with his ex gf kinda got left hanging.

There better be a sequel to this! Lol. Honestly i love this story and i wanna see what happens to mike in the underworld, and how he copes. Oh and if there is a sequel. Please explain the 30 min of agony in some way. I am really curious what happened.

.. also loved Nemesis, while i dont think there can be a sequel to this story, as it ties up everything like a bow.

but it would always be welcomed, thanks again.

this story begs for a sequel, and so do i !!!!

That earlier Anonymous is right. You should write for TV and movies. You do banter really well. The conversations between the characters are the best part of this excellent story. Thanx for a good read.

Tim

Horror, Romance, Humor, and a lovely lesson on summoning demons. Gotta love it. This was so well written and spooky! Perfect blend. It was awesome. Thank you.

Wow! That ending!

Awesome story!! Great characters, great scenes, just great!! Of course, I was hoping that Mike would get the girl and that Desmond would get taken to Hell in Mike's place *sigh*.

Great story though!! Keep writing!

and howling and ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,on down the line.

Thank you for the laughs, I needed them!

Though i read it toward the end of november... And thus my feed back is now not usefull...

This story is hellarious... And I only hold a small grudge that you made me laugh so hard with a broken rib and possible collapsed lung... If only there were more of Lucis type, i might not hold such disdain for this world... Keep folk in check...

Good story... Quite good...

did she take his soul with her

Would have preferred a more romantic and sweet ending, but I loved this. You should write a novel.

except the ending. You could actually explain if he woke up in the Hell, or smth. Now it's just a sweet story with a seriously fucked up ending and I'm confused...

fer...

It is cute, but not for the naive...

Green-something

aww I was hoping for a happy ending of endless sexing in hell lol.

It sounded like luci took his soul with her to hell specifically because she liked him. Although I suppose it could have been a joke from her then she just did what comes naturally to her once she was able to.

.... stories i've read here. Due to work and family affairs i couldn't read it in 1 breath (which i so strongly desired), so this took me 3 full days to cover. Got a funny fealing in my gut from this story, kept on thinking about it constantly - it's great!!!

Needs not just a sequel, needs to become a series. Not thinking the end is bad - let's not forget that Luci thinks differently than us cause she's not from around here. Our thinking (and Mike's) states he met a horrible death. In my view Luci's logic states she's getting her new buddy with her, to her realm, exactly for constant fucking. I was left with the impression she's becoming a little more "human"around Mike (she made her first joke), and he showed her some new to her things (like the pussy eating) despite her collosal age.

Would be great to continue the story, evolve the characters, show Luci's world, might include a comeback to our realm for the couple in order to calm the parrents down or something. You've got a great story started, please keep it going! :)

Clever and entertaining.

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Sexcellente!

11/10!!!!!

That was intense, suspenseful, erotic and completely original (at least to me). I can't even begin to convey just how much I enjoyed it. However, I am curious how Mike if faring in the ether?

Unintended consequences. Playing with 'fire's? A modern campy version of 'Faustus'?